If you had a lot of money, what is the first thing you\'ll buy and why?
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If I had a lot of money, I will buy my dream house that is a two-story house with a yard and an attic. So I can grill barbecue or Sam Gyeob Sal at the yard with my family or friends. Also, An attic where I can see the constellations.
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Hi Elic:)
Great and practical choice! This is a perfect house for inviting people over and having parties. I hope you can invest in one some day.
If I had a lot of money, I will buy my dream house that is a two-story house with a yard and an attic.
>> If I had a lot of money, I will buy my dream house which is a two-story house with a yard and an attic.
So I can grill barbecue or Sam Gyeob Sal at the yard with my family or friends.
>> I want this so I can grill and eat samgyeopsal at the yard with my family or friends.
Also, An attic where I can see the constellations.
>> Also, an attic is where I can see the constellations.
>> Also, an attic is where I can see the constellations.
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