If you had a lot of money, what is the first thing you\'ll buy and why?

2022-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you had a lot of money, what is the first thing you\'ll buy and why? I will buy a house or a building. Real estate is worth investing in for my future. I think that it is better than depositing money to the bank. For the rest of the money, I will travel or buy things that I want to.

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Hi [이름]:)

Those are actually great investments!

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I will buy a house or a building.

>> CORRECT

Real estate is worth investing in for my future.

>> CORRECT

I think that it is better than depositing money to the bank.

>> CORRECT

For the rest of the money, I will travel or buy things that I want to.

>> CORRECT

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