If you had a piggy bank, what would you use the money you’re saving for?
학생이 쓴 원문
Now, I don\'t have something to buy with my piggy bank\'s money. But if I grow up, I will use it for my future hospital bills. And save more money, then I want to buy and learn a new musical instrument.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
Now, I don\'t have something to buy with my piggy bank\'s money.
>> Correct
But if I grow up, I will use it for my future hospital bills.
>> Correct
And save more money, then I want to buy and learn a new musical instrument.
>> Correct
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