If you had a thousand bucks (1000 USD) where would you go on a holiday?
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it is so happy imagination.
if i had that money, i want to visit new York.
i have many list of city where i want to go but first is new York.
because umm reason is simple. new York is the best city in the world.
when i saw this question, new York came up right away.
we (especially \"I\") exposed to new York a lot of time while we are watching movie, through tv drama, advertisement and so on.
there are so many media to connect us to other city.
whenever i saw the new York i was just thinking \' ahh someday i want..\'
and another simple reason is 1000 USD. USD is american money haha.
but one thing is 1000usd is looks like big money, in real... NO
it doesn\'t affordable to get ticket.
i just want to spend 1000USD in new york.
oh central park is amazing now i\'m imagining.
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Hola Will IAM!,
Yeah truly, this would be a great idea if you had a thousand bucks to go on a holiday but I agree that it is not a huge amount, so work hard and do well to earn more than a thousand bucks so you can go to New York.
-Rachel
it is so happy imagination.
>> correct
>> OR: It is a fun imagination.
if i had that money, i want to visit new York.
if i had that money, i want to visit new York.
>> correct
i have many list of city where i want to go but first is new York because umm reason is simple. new York is the best city in the world.
i have many list of city where i want to go but first is new York because umm reason is simple. new York is the best city in the world.
>> correct
>> OR: I have a list of cities where I want to go, and the first one is New York because the reason is simple. It is the best city in the world.
when i saw this question, new York came up right away.
when i saw this question, new York came up right away.
>> correct
>> OR: When I read this question, I immediately thought of New York.
we (especially \"I\") are exposed to new York a lot of time while we are watching movie, through TV drama, advertisement and so on.
we (especially \"I\") are exposed to new York a lot of time while we are watching movie, through TV drama, advertisement and so on.
>> correct (just add are after we because you need a verb after the subject -we are)
there are so many media to connect us to other city.
there are so many media to connect us to other city.
>> There are too many media types to connect us to other cities.
whenever i saw the new York i was just thinking \' ahh someday i want..\'
whenever i saw the new York i was just thinking \' ahh someday i want..\'
>> Whenever I hear or read the word New York, I always thought that someday I can go there.
and another simple reason is 1000 USD. USD is american money haha.
and another simple reason is 1000 USD. USD is american money haha.
>> correct (this is funny though)
but one thing is 1000usd is looks like big money, in real... NO
but one thing is 1000usd is looks like big money, in real... NO
>> 1000 USD looks like it is a big amount of money but it is not.
it doesn\'t affordable to get ticket.
it doesn\'t affordable to get ticket.
>> It can\'t afford to purchase or buy a plane ticket.
>> OR: It is not enough to buy or purchase a plane ticket.
i just want to spend 1000USD in new york. oh central park is amazing now i\'m imagining.
i just want to spend 1000USD in new york. oh central park is amazing now i\'m imagining.
>> I just want to spend it in New York or Central Park, and the thought of it is just amazing.
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