If you had all the money you needed, what three services would you hire to make life easier?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had money, I would hire someone to get following services to make my life easier. The first thing is doing household chores such as cleaning the house, doing the dishes, doing the laundry and pressing clothes. The second one is driving to go to work. I often doze at the wheel and drive while drowsy to go to work. I got into car accidents twice before because I fell asleep while driving. So I want to avoid driving except the case that I drive for fun. The last one is cooking for my wife because it’s is very annoying and stressful for her to think over what meals she has to make and to actually cook every day. However, the most unfeasible wish for me is to have someone who can earn money for me. Would it be a great idea to get someone to make money for me? All of these are just impractical things. Think about what would you do if you have time that you saved by hiring someone to do the tasks on behalf of you? Would you use the time to do more productive things?
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
Thank you for your great words last night.
I\'m glad that you received the messages I sent you last Friday.
I just really don\'t want a day to be wasted. ^-^
I know how each day is important for you.
Anyway, I love your ideas. Hihihi!
I would also hire someone to do some tasks for me.
But it is not good to be dependent. We should be the one who should do the things we want.
I really like reading your essays, thank you for making me smile today. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
If I had money, I would hire someone to get following services to make my life easier.
>> If I have all of the money, I would hire someone to do the following services to make my life easier.
The first thing is doing household chores such as cleaning the house, doing the dishes, doing the laundry and pressing clothes.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The first thing is doing household chores such as cleaning, pressing the clothes doing the dishes and laundry.
The second one is driving to go to work.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Second is that he/she will drive for me to go to work.
I often doze at the wheel and drive while drowsy to go to work.
>> I often doze at the wheel and drive while being drowsy to go to work.
>> OR: I often take a nap at the wheel and I stil drive to report to work even if I feel drowsy.
I got into car accidents twice before because I fell asleep while driving.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I was involved in two car accidents before because I feel asleep while driving.
So I want to avoid driving except the case that I drive for fun.
>> Did you mean: So I want to avoid driving except for the case that I have to do it for fun.
The last one is cooking for my wife because it’s is very annoying and stressful for her to think over what meals she has to make and to actually cook every day.
>> The last one is cooking for my wife. Because it\'s very annoying and stressful for her to think over what meals she has to make and to actually cook everyday. >> OR: Lastly, I want someone to cook for my wife because she feels annoyed and stressed to think over what meals she has to cook.
However, the most unfeasible wish for me is to have someone who can earn money for me.
>> Correct!
Would it be a great idea to get someone to make money for me?
>> Correct!
>> OR: Would it be a good idea to hire someone to earn money for me?
All of these are just impractical things.
>> Correct!
Think about what would you do if you have time that you saved by hiring someone to do the tasks on behalf of you?
>> Correct!
Would you use the time to do more productive things?
>> Correct!
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