If you had an extra hour each day, what hobby would you spend it on?
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If I had an extra time every day,I will play tennis .I want be a player better than now
when I play tennis ,I game with partner. I usually I don\'t get win because of me.
so I want to be a good player,
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! Improvement comes with regular practice. With your dedication and a positive attitude, you can become a skilled player in the future. ^^ Have a great day today!
~T. Jewel
If I had an extra time every day,I will play tennis .
>>If I had extra time every day, I would play tennis.
I want be a player better than now
>>I want to be a better player than I am now.
when I play tennis ,I game with partner.
when I play tennis ,I game with partner.
>>When I play tennis, I play games with a partner.
I usually I don\'t get win because of me.
>>I usually don’t win because of myself.
so I want to be a good player,
so I want to be a good player,
>>So, I want to be a better player.
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