If you had children, how would you teach them about the importance of saving?
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I will teach children about the importance of saving. It is important and they should use it forever. If they save money, they won\'t regret it.
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I will teach children about the importance of saving.
>> I will teach my children about the importance of saving.
It is important and they should use it forever.
>> Saving is important and they should do this their entire lives.
If they save money, they won\'t regret it.
>> correct
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