If you had grown up in a different city or country, how would your life have been different?
학생이 쓴 원문
I appreciate that my grandfather was born in South Korea and didn\'t choose to go to North Korea.
If I was living in North Korea, I could not enjoy a life that can freely choose what to do and where to live and would live in the poverty.
I would not able to feel the happiness if I am living without freedom.
I sometimes feel sorry the lives of people in North Korea are very harsh because of the dictatorship there.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. Good thing your grandfather stayed in South Korea and, sadly, people in North Korea have to endure hardship. I am just glad you are in South Korea or we would not have met and had English classes.^^ See you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I appreciate that my grandfather was born in South Korea and didn\'t choose to go to North Korea.
>>> I appreciate that my grandfather was born in South Korea and did not choose to go to North Korea.
If I was living in North Korea, I could not enjoy a life that can freely choose what to do and where to live and would live in the poverty.
>>> If I were living in North Korea, I could not enjoy a life that can freely choose what I want to do and where to live and would live in poverty.
I would not able to feel the happiness if I am living without freedom.
>>> I would be able to feel happy if I am living without freedom.
I sometimes feel sorry the lives of people in North Korea are very harsh because of the dictatorship there.
>>> I sometimes feel sorry for the lives of people in North Korea are very harsh because of the dictatorship there.
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