If you had money to spare, what would you buy or invest in? Explain why.
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If I have money to spare, I want to invest in South Korea science.
Of course many people are investing to a lot of kinds of science parts.
But most people are investing in the science parts about industry.
They think investing to a pure science is dangerous because we don\'t know that it will make a benefit to us or a damage.
But I think a pure science has to be developed for our future, so I wnat to invest in South Korea pure science.
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Hi [이름]:)
Wow, that\'s very critical of you to think of. Your answer is very reasonable. Your country would benefit a lot from you if so.
If I have money to spare, I want to invest in South Korea science.
>>If I have money to spare, I want to invest in South Korea\'s modern science.
Of course many people are investing to a lot of kinds of science parts.
>> Of course a lot of people are already investing on it.
But most people are investing in the science parts about industry.
>> But most of them are only investing the industry part of Science.
They think investing to a pure science is dangerous because we don\'t know that it will make a benefit to us or a damage.
>> They think that investing on pure Science is dangerous because there is no assurance whether is it going to be a success or not.
But I think a pure science has to be developed for our future, so I wnat to invest in South Korea pure science.
>>But I think a pure science has to be developed for our future that\'s why I want to invest on it.
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