If you had more free time, what would you do with it?

Good afternoon, Min! ^-^)

Thank you for this composition.

It is quite long, however, your sentences were somehow redundant.

Next time, express your thoughts in an orderly manner, okay? :)

Enjoy the rest of the day. See you tomorrow.^^

_T. Mayleen :)

If i have more free time, I will have more time with my girl friend.

>>> If I have more free time, I will spend it with my girlfriend.

I am busy in these days. So I don\'t have much time with her.

>>> I am busy these days so I don\'t get to spend time with her.

I\'m sorry to her.

>>> I feel sorry to her.

I want to go to the other country.

>>> I want to go to another country.

And I want to study English.

>>> I also want to study English.

I have so many thing that I want to do but the problem is always that I have no time.

>>> I have so many things I want to do but the problem is I always have no time.

I would meet my friend and talk together and have some delicious food.

>>> I will meet my friend and talk while having some delicious food.

And I will play the game.

>>> I will play games.

I found the game that i am interested in as going to PC room with my girl friend.

>>> There\'s a game I\'m interested in and I want to go to PC room with my girlfriend.

She and me feel fun to the game.

>>> My girlfriend and I both enjoy playing games.

So I want to play the game with my girl
friend.

>>> Thus, I want to play games with her.