If you had more free time, what would you do with it?

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Here are my corrections for you:

If I have a free time more, I will learn painting. 

>> If I have more free time, I will learn how to paint.

I would like to do before, I was busy that time. 

>> I would like to do it before but I was busy at the time. 

I will draw more and talke a picture as well. 

>> I will draw more and take pictures as well.

It must be fun.

>> CORRECT!