If you had one wish, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
My one wish is I want to be a Bill Gates. If I were Bill Gates, I have a smart brain and huge amounts of money. That must be cool!
강사 첨삭
That\'s cool! I never thought of that.
Great answer for today\'s assignment.
~Teacher Eve.
My one wish is I want to be a Bill Gates.
>> My one wish would be to become like Bill Gates.
If I were Bill Gates, I have a smart brain and huge amounts of money.
>> If I were Bill Gates, I will have a smart brain and a huge amount of money.
That must be cool!
>> Correct!
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