If you had one wish, what would it be? Please explain.
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Thank you so much for answering your home, Mr. [이름].
I have the same problem as you as well, but hopefully we can travel around the world.
See you in class!
~Teacher Eve.
I wish to travel all around the world.
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because I like to learn about another culture and make new friends.
>> Because I like to learn about other cultures and make new friends.
and if I can travel all around, I will be able to learn many things.
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I think It will be very useful for my future.
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but it is impossible for me because of some problems such as money and time.
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so I usually have experience indirectly by reading a book or watching YouTube.
>> So I usually have an experience indirectly by reading a book or watching YouTube.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.