If you had one wish, what would it be? Please explain.

2020-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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I wish to travel all around the world. because I like to learn about another culture and make new friends. and if I can travel all around, I will be able to learn many things. I think It will be very useful for my future. but it is impossible for me because of some problems such as money and time. so I usually have experience indirectly by reading a book or watching YouTube.

강사 첨삭

HAPPY FRIDAY! 

Thank you so much for answering your home, Mr. [이름].

I have the same problem as you as well, but hopefully we can travel around the world. 

See you in class!

~Teacher Eve.   

I wish to travel all around the world.

>> Correct!

because I like to learn about another culture and make new friends.

>> Because I like to learn about other cultures and make new friends.

and if I can travel all around, I will be able to learn many things.

>> Correct!

I think It will be very useful for my future.

>> Correct!
 but it is impossible for me because of some problems such as money and time.

>> Correct!

 so I usually have experience indirectly by reading a book or watching YouTube.

>> So I usually have an experience indirectly by reading a book or watching YouTube.

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