If you had one wish, what would it be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish I had a robot that cleans my room.
The robot will clean my room if I tell it where I want to clean.
Because it is nuisance to clean my room.
It takes a lot of time and energy and my room becomes mess again soon.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
The robot will clean my room if I tell it where I want to clean.
Because it is nuisance to clean my room.
It takes a lot of time and energy and my room becomes mess again soon.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I wish I had a robot that cleans my room.
>> CORRECT!
The robot will clean my room if I tell it where I want to clean.
>> CORRECT!
Because it is nuisance to clean my room.
>> Because it is a nuisance to clean my room.
It takes a lot of time and energy and my room becomes mess again soon.
>> It takes a lot of time and energy, and my room becomes messy again after.
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