If you had the chance to change your name, would you do it? Why or why not?
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I won\'t because I already had a experience to change my name. here\'s a story. as soon as I was born, I had heart disease. My name was Tae Jung which means being big. My grandmather ask monk how I could heal disease. so He recommanded to changing my name. After changing name, surgury was well. so that\'s why I am here. I\'ll never change my name. currently, my name is Woo Jung. It means being comfortable like home.
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Hi [이름]! Wow that\'s a very interesting story. I think your name is already unique and you shouldn\'t change it anymore. :)
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I won\'t because I already had a experience to change my name.
>> I won\'t because I already had an experience changing my name.
here\'s a story. as soon as I was born, I had heart disease.
>> Here\'s the story. When I was born, I had a heart disease.
My name was Tae Jung which means being big.
>> CORRECT
My grandmather ask monk how I could heal disease. so He recommanded to changing my name.
>>My grandmother asked a monk on how the disease would be healed and he recommended to change my name.
After changing name, surgury was well. so that\'s why I am here.
>>After changing my name, the surgery went well that\'s why I am here.
I\'ll never change my name. currently, my name is Woo Jung.
>>I\'ll never change my name. Currently, my name is Woo Jung.
It means being comfortable like home.
>>CORRECT
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