If you had the chance to explore anywhere in the world, where would you like to go and what would yo

2025-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Well, I think that\'s a difficult question. First of all, I want to go to Amazon. I heard that there are many interesting animals and plants in the Amazon, but I want to go there only once. But Amazon is a jungle and there are many dangerous elements, so it may be too much to go to. Also, I hate bugs and insects the most, so how many of them would there be in the jungle? So, I want to go to Galapagos. The Galapagos are called early islands that preserce many species in nature because they think it will be safer than the Amazon.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your homework answer to me.
Great job in expressing your thoughts.
I was imagining the places, and I think either of the two would really give us a wonderful adventure.

But of course, like you mentioned, it is still important to choose the place that is safer. ^^

~ Teacher Gina

Well, I think that\'s a difficult question.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I think that’s a tough question to answer.

First of all, I want to go to Amazon.

>> First of all, I want to go to the Amazon.

I heard that there are many interesting animals and plants in the Amazon, but I want to go there only once.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I’ve heard the Amazon is full of fascinating animals and plants, though I’d probably only go there once.

But Amazon is a jungle and there are many dangerous elements, so it may be too much to go to.

>> But the Amazon is a jungle, and there are many dangers, so it might be too much for me.

Also, I hate bugs and insects the most, so how many of them would there be in the jungle?

>> Also, I really hate bugs and insects, and I imagine there would be a lot of them in the jungle.

So, I want to go to Galapagos.

>> So, I want to go to the Galapagos.

The Galapagos are called early islands that preserce many species in nature because they think it will be safer than the Amazon.

>> The Galapagos Islands are known for preserving many natural species, and I think they would be safer than the Amazon.

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