If you had the chance to go to any concert in the world, whose concert would you want to go to most
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I want to go to Sung Si Kyoung concert. Sung si kyoung is my favorite singer. He is good at ballad. He has a sweet voice.
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If you had the chance to go to any concert in the world, whose concert would you want to go to most (dead or alive singers/bands)? Why?
I want to go to Sung Si Kyoung concert.
>> I want to go to Sung Si Kyoung\'s concert.
>> OR: Without a doubt, I\'d choose to go to Sung Si Kyoung\'s concert.
Sung Si Kyoung is my favorite singer.
>> OR: I am a massive fan of Sung Si Kyoung.
He is good at ballad. He has a sweet voice.
>> He is good at singing ballads and has a sweet voice.
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