If you had the power to stop a natural disaster that has happened in the past, which would you choos
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I save people and animals\' lives and make efforts to stop destroying physical assets at that moment right away. I do not have any doubts about my decision.
Let me see. How is it? I\'m bagging the strong power to get rid of fundamental causes of a natural disaster like rebooting our earth even if I pull back and looked at many death. I\'m afraid that we are late to recovering. ㅠㅠ
Well...
I won\'t guarantee that a clean planet will be inherited by the next generation.
I told you that I\'m a very tiny person.
But we must remember our responsibility to protect the environment.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Liz!
If we only have superpowers, we can do these things we hope for especially for the future generation.
Thank you for spending time writing your thoughts. Be inspired always :)
See you!
See you!
Aki~~
First of all, I save people and animals\' lives and make efforts to stop destroying physical assets at that moment right away.
>>> CORRECT!
I do not have any doubts about my decision.
>>> CORRECT!
Let me see. How is it? I\'m begging the strong power to get rid of fundamental causes of a natural disaster like rebooting our earth even if I pull back and looked at many death.
>>> CORRECT!
I\'m afraid that we are late to recovering. ㅠㅠ
>>> I\'m afraid that we are late to recover.
Well... I won\'t guarantee that a clean planet will be inherited by the next generation.
>>> CORRECT!
I told you that I\'m a very tiny person.
>>> CORRECT!
But we must remember our responsibility to protect the environment.
>>> CORRECT!
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