If you had time and money, how would you spend your weekend.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have time and money I will go on a trip with my family because I like travel.
I will visit the landmark and watch TV or sauna in hotel.
강사 첨삭
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If you had time and money, how would you spend your weekend?
If I have time and money I will go on a trip with my family because I like travel.
>> If I had time and money, I would go on a trip with my family because I like traveling.
I will visit the landmark and watch TV or sauna in hotel.
>> I will visit landmarks and watch TV or go to the sauna in the hotel.
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