If you had to choose between a strict vegetarian diet forever or a junk food diet forever, which wou
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Hi Sir [이름]!
I want to confess something. Hihihi.
I am fond of eating junk food. I can\'t control myself from eating it.
Especially when I am stressed. I agree with you.
We should explain to children the bad effects of it.
I am sure that they will understand it.
Teacher Nina
If I had to choose between a strict vegetarian diet forever or a junk food diet forever, I would choose the former because eating a junk food forever could give a critical impact to my body.
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I would become fat and suffer from a lot of diseases.
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>> I would become fat and suffer from various illnesses.
I won’t be able to live long due to the health problem.
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>> I won\'t be able to have a long life due to health problems.
Eating junk foods is an unavoidable temptation, although I try hard not to do it.
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It is so tasty and delicious that once we are used to, it is really hard to stop eating them.
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Schools in some states in the US are banned to offer students with soda like cola or sweet milk for lunch for the sake of Children’s health.
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>> Schools in some states in the US are banned to offer students with soda like cola or sweet milk for lunch for the sake of the children’s health.
It was a stern and aggressive measure to protect young children from such not nutritious diet.
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We are well aware of the impact of eating unhealthy food, however, we as a weak human being do not have strong will to put ourselves under control.
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>> We are well aware of the impact of eating unhealthy food. However, we as a weak human being do not have strong will to control.
The strict vegetarian diet might be as difficult as a junk food diet because when we have social gatherings, we sometimes do not have choice.
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