If you had to choose between love and no money or money and no love for the rest of your life, which
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to choose the life with money and no love.
Of course I am very happy now with my boyfriend but I will choose money if I could get a wealthy life.
Firstly, I usually don\'t feel Ioneliness easily. I like spending time alone doing various things.
Secondly, having money means I have many chances to learn and experience.
I think I could be happy for the rest of my day spending time on my hobbies and trips to many places.
Lastly, I have my family. I understand that the love in this questions only means love with the couples.
I already feel unconditional and enough love from my mother.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름]!^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I think I would choose the same thing. I hope we could talk more about this in class. See you then. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I would like to choose the life with money and no love.
>>> CORRECT =)
Of course I am very happy now with my boyfriend but I will choose money if I could get a wealthy life.
>>> Of course, I am very happy now with my boyfriend but I will choose money if I could get/ have a wealthy life.
Firstly, I usually don\'t feel Ioneliness easily.
>>> Firstly, I usually do not feel loneliness easily.
I like spending time alone doing various things.
>>> CORRECT =)
Secondly, having money means I have many chances to learn and experience.
>>> Secondly, having money means I have many chances to learn and experience new things.
I think I could be happy for the rest of my day spending time on my hobbies and trips to many places.
>>> I think I could be happy for the rest of my days/ life spending time on my hobbies and trips to many places.
Lastly, I have my family.
>>> CORRECT =)
I understand that the love in this questions only means love with the couples.
>>> I understand that the love in this question only means romantic love.
I already feel unconditional and enough love from my mother.
>>> CORRECT =)
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.