If you had to choose only 3 adjectives to describe yourself, which would you choose?
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I would choose the adjectives, talkative, enthusiastic and sensitive to describe myself. First of all, I am a talkative person. Sometimes, my friends who don\'t enjoy talking avoid me. However, I think it\'s better than to be silent. Also, it lets me have many friends, so I like my personality. Second, I\'m enthusiastic. I think I\'m enthusiastic to most jobs. It makes me feel tired sometimes, but it also makes me try hard and let me be good at them. Lastly, I\'m sensitive. Because of my personality, I care about everything which inclouds not that important jobs. I had tried not to care about not that important jobs, but it is too hard for me. Sometimes I envy my friends who doesn\'t care about everything.
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I would choose the adjectives, talkative, enthusiastic and sensitive to describe myself.
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First of all, I am a talkative person.
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Sometimes, my friends who don\'t enjoy talking avoid me.
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OR>> My friends who are not talkative try to avoid me.
However, I think it\'s better than to be silent.
>> CORRECT
Also, it lets me have many friends, so I like my personality.
>> CORRECT
Second, I\'m enthusiastic.
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I think I\'m enthusiastic to most jobs.
>> I think I\'m enthusiastic in doing most jobs.
It makes me feel tired sometimes, but it also makes me try hard and let me be good at them.
>> CORRECT
OR>> It makes me feel tired sometimes, but it also pushes me to try hard and allows me to be good at them.
Lastly, I\'m sensitive.
>> CORRECT
Because of my personality, I care about everything which inclouds not that important jobs.
>> Because of my personality, I care about everything even those which includes not that important jobs.
I had tried not to care about not that important jobs, but it is too hard for me.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I envy my friends who doesn\'t care about everything.
>> CORRECT
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