If you had to eliminate a sport or several sports from the Olympics, which would you choose? Support
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If I had to eliminate a sport or several sports from the Olympics, I would remove curling.
>> If I had to eliminate a sport from the Olympics, I would remove curling.
There are two reasons to support my answer.
>> Correct.
The first reason is that I think it is not kind of hard sports.
>> The first reason is that I think it is not a kind of hard sport.
Personally, sports should make our body tire, but it doesn\'t like that.
>> Personally, I think that sports should make our body tired, but it doesn\'t apply that way.
Another reason is that I\'m not interested in the event.
>> Correct.
I\'m an active person, so I enjoy watching track and field or swim.
>> I\'m an active person, so I enjoy watching track and field or swimming.
However, whenever I watched this one, it makes me bore.
>> However, whenever I watch this one, it makes me feel bored.
As a result, I think curling need to be eliminated for these reaosns.
>> As a result, I think curling needs to be eliminated for these reasons.
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