If you had to give up your cellphone, your computer, or your TV, which one item would you choose to

2023-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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If I have to give up one of them, I will give up my computer. Because, these days I hardly use a computer. Computer was replaced by a smartphone except when I\'m working at company.

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Thank you for doing your homework. Great job for today\'s homework.
~Kelly^^
If I have to give up one of them, I will give up my computer.
>> Correct
Because, these days I hardly use a computer.
>> Correct
Computer was replaced by a smartphone except when I\'m working at company.
>> Correct

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