If you had to leave your home quickly because of danger, what would you take with you? What would yo

2022-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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if i face dangerous situation so i have to leave my home, maybe i\'m leaving with my car. i can\'t save all. if i lost my house, my car to be a home. And if i lost my all, i will feel depress. because it is very hard to make wealth.

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Good evening [이름]! Happy Friday! I hope that you will have  a great weekend. Thank you for taking the time to work on your homework. ^_^
T. Irene
if i face dangerous situation so i have to leave my home, maybe i\'m leaving with my car.
>>> If I face a dangerous situation and have to leave my home, maybe I will take my car.
i can\'t save all.
>>> I can\'t save all my things/stuff.
if i lost my house, my car to be a home.
>>> If I lose my house, I can at least use my car as a home. 
And if i lost my all, i will feel depress because it is very hard to make wealth.
>>> If I lose everything, I will be depressed because it is very hard to earn money again. 




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