If you had to lose one of your senses(sight, smell, hearing, touch, taste) which would you rather lo
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All senses are important, but If I have to choose a sense. I would choose smelling. There is a saying that If your face is 100, your eyes are 90. It means that sight is the most important sense in your face. Hearing is a way to communicate with people. If I lose a sense of touch, when I touch my wife and children. I can\'t feel anything. Can you imagine a life which living without tastes? I can\'t. It will be hell. losing a sense of smell is easier than losing other senses.
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Good morning [이름]ny! :)
Thank you for answering our essay question and thoroughly explaining why they are important.
I agree that all of them are important and we won\'t be able to survive without them. I can\'t imagine living life without them.
That\'s why I feel sad whenever I encounter people who lacks one of them because I know that they are missing out on a lot of things.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
All senses are important, but If I have to choose a sense. I would choose smelling. Thank you for answering our essay question and thoroughly explaining why they are important.
I agree that all of them are important and we won\'t be able to survive without them. I can\'t imagine living life without them.
That\'s why I feel sad whenever I encounter people who lacks one of them because I know that they are missing out on a lot of things.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> All senses are important, but if I had to choose a sense, I would choose the sense of smell.
There is a saying that If your face is 100, your eyes are 90.
>> There is a saying that if your face is 100, your eyes are 90.
It means that sight is the most important sense in your face.
>> CORRECT!
Hearing is a way to communicate with people.
>> Hearing is necessary to communicate with people.
If I lose a sense of touch, when I touch my wife and children.
>> If I lose my sense of touch, I won\'t feel anything when I touch my wife and children.
I can\'t feel anything.
>> CORRECT!
Can you imagine a life which living without tastes?
>> Can you imagine living a life without your sense of taste?
I can\'t.
>> CORRECT!
It will be hell.
>> CORRECT!
losing a sense of smell is easier than losing other senses.
>> Losing the sense of smell is easier than losing the other senses.
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