If you had to marry either a poor man whom you really loved or a rich man whom you did not love, whi

2022-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I want to marry with love someone even if hi is a poor man. It is because marriage is not a business, so money is not all the thing. If I don\'t love someone, I cannot marry with him. But it is sure that money cannot exclude of marry and I would consider about the money before marry. But love must be first thing for marriage. So I will happier to marry with loved person. If I marry with rich man whom I did love, I will regret and painful everyday. Marriage is meaning for love to me but if some people would be make a rich family for marriage, it is better than poor people. But one thing is the sure they never happier than me.

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Hello [이름] [이름]!
Choose the right person for you.  Money can make you happy, but love is still more important since you cannot buy love. See you tonight! ^^


~T. Maine

I want to marry with love someone even if hi is a poor man.
>> I want to marry someone I love even if he is a poor man. 
It is because marriage is not a business, so money is not all the thing.
>> Correct. 
 If I don\'t love someone, I cannot marry with him.
>> If I don\'t love someone, I cannot marry him. 
But it is sure that money cannot exclude of marry and I would consider about the money before marry.
>> But it is sure that money cannot be excluded in getting married and I would consider this before marrying.  
But love must be first thing for marriage.
>> But love must be the first thing in marriage. 
So I will happier to marry with loved person.
>> So I will be happier to marry the person I love. 
If I marry with rich man whom I did love, I will regret and painful everyday.
>> If I marry a rich man who I don\'t love, I will regret it and suffer the pain every day. 
Marriage is meaning for love to me but if some people would be make a rich family for marriage, it is better than poor people.
>> Marriage means loving me for who I am.  If someone would marry rich to assure a quality of life, that is better than having a poor family. 
But one thing is the sure they never happier than me.
>> But one thing is for sure it will never be happier. 

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