If you had to pick only one - would you want to be a great singer or a great dancer?(ANSWER)

When I have to choose one of them, I would choose a great singer. Because, I can earn money easily then dancer.(I think.) And I can tell people my voice. Also I might have my fans. If I were a group, there would be a cheering stick. It must be cool. :) -END-

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HOMEWORK:

 

If you had to pick only one - would you want to be a great singer or a great dancer?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

When I have to choose one of them, I would choose a great singer.
Because, I can earn money easily then dancer.(I think.)
And I can tell people my voice.
Also I might have my fans.
If I were a group, there would be a cheering stick.
It must be cool.
:)

 

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

If I have to choose one of them, I would choose becoming a great singer.
A great singer can earn money easier than a dancer. (I think.)
And, I can let people hear my voice.
Also, I might have my fans.
If I am with a group onstage, there would be a cheering stick.
That must be cool. :)

 

 

 

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  ---------T. Alexia----------