If you had to teach a class for a day, what would you teach and why?

2024-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I will don\'t study. I will make students play and have fun on that day. I am a student so I know how students are hard to go school and study at class. If I can be an teacher I want to give them 1hours of free time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sunny!
I know it\'s a bit challenging but you should never give up.
This is good practice for you.
I hope you find it effective to make you work harder.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I will don\'t study. 
>> I will not let my students study. 
I will make students play and have fun on that day.
>> I will allow my students to play and have fun on that day. 
I am a student so I know how students are hard to go school and study at class.
>> I am a student so I know how hard it is to go to school and study in class.
If I can be an teacher I want to give them 1hours of free time.
>> If I could be a teacher for a day, I would want to give a students an hour of free time. 

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