If you had to teach someone one thing, what would you teach why?
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Hi there Sir [이름] ^^
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You are right, being knowledgeable and skilled at something is an important key in teaching.
However, I think people can still learn and improve their skills when learning something new.
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Teacher Nina
In order to teach someone, I should be knowledgeable about the subject and having rich experience is necessary.
>> In order to teach someone, I should be knowledgeable about the subject and have lots of experience is necessary.
However, thinking about what area I’m good at, I cannot pinpoint anything, neither proudly say that I’m an expert at something.
>> correct
For instance, I don’t like people who are rude and hope that they are educated.
>> correct
However, I cannot be someone who teaches them because I might look impolite and behave badly from other people’s point of view.
>> correct
Talking about academy, I might want to teach someone on how to invest wisely and make a big profit because I’m very much interested in earning money like everybody does.
>> correct
However, I have not studied it and actually failed many times because of careless and impulsive investment.
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Thorough analysis and research should have been carried out before making an investment decision.
>> Did you mean: Thorough analysis and research should have been carried out before making a decision about investing something.
However, here is an irony.
>> correct
Real rich people do not teach or disclose information about making money, some books say.
>> Better: Some books say. Real rich people do not teach or disclose information about making money.
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