If you had to teach someone one thing, what would you teach why?

2015-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In order to teach someone, I should be knowledgeable about the subject and having rich experience is necessary. However, thinking about what area I’m good at, I cannot pinpoint anything, neither proudly say that I’m an expert at something. For instance, I don’t like people who are rude and hope that they are educated. However, I cannot be someone who teaches them because I might look impolite and behave badly from other people’s point of view. Talking about academy, I might want to teach someone on how to invest wisely and make a big profit because I’m very much interested in earning money like everybody does. However, I have not studied it and actually failed many times because of careless and impulsive investment. Thorough analysis and research should have been carried out before making an investment decision. However, here is an irony. Real rich people do not teach or disclose information about making money, some books say.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름] ^^

Happy Tuesday!

You are right, being knowledgeable and skilled at something is an important key in teaching.

However, I think people can still learn and improve their skills when learning something new.

Thank you for your doing your homework.

I hope that you are having a great day.
Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


In order to teach someone, I should be knowledgeable about the subject and having rich experience is necessary. 

>> In order to teach someone, I should be knowledgeable about the subject and have lots of experience is necessary. 

However, thinking about what area I’m good at, I cannot pinpoint anything, neither proudly say that I’m an expert at something.

>> correct

For instance, I don’t like people who are rude and hope that they are educated.

>> correct

However, I cannot be someone who teaches them because I might look impolite and behave badly from other people’s point of view.

>> correct

Talking about academy, I might want to teach someone on how to invest wisely and make a big profit because I’m very much interested in earning money like everybody does. 

>> correct

However, I have not studied it and actually failed many times because of careless and impulsive investment. 

>> correct

Thorough analysis and research should have been carried out before making an investment decision. 

>> Did you mean: Thorough analysis and research should have been carried out before making a decision about investing something.  

However, here is an irony. 

>> correct 

Real rich people do not teach or disclose information about making money, some books say.

>> Better: Some books say. Real rich people do not teach or disclose information about making money.

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