If you have a big amount of money, what will you do about it?
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if i have a lot of money, i will buy APT in seoul. And i learning to invest about money, anything do it. maybe.. i think best of invest is in KOREA, buy the APT in seoul more than stock.
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Hi, Ena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best! :)
~ T. Camille
if i have a lot of money, i will buy APT in seoul.
>> If I have a lot of money, I will buy an apartment in Seoul.
And i learning to invest about money, anything do it. maybe..
>> I also need to learn how to invest money, anything is possible, maybe.
i think best of invest is in KOREA, buy the APT in seoul more than stock.
>> I think the best way to invest in Korea is to buy an apartment in Seoul more than buying stocks.
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