If you have a chance of relocating in another country, would you do that?

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I\'m glad to know that you want to widen your perspective by meeting new people from the different parts of the world.

I think Canada is a good choice because that country is beautiful. ^^

I want to go there someday too. :)

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I have always had a dream about going abroad and living there.

>> CORRECT!

I want to see broader world and do my work with various people.

>> I want to see a broader world and do my work with various people.

I think Korea is small place to meet various people who have different types of view.

>> I think Korea is a small place to meet various people who have different types of view.

Actually I have a plan to study in Canada next year.

>> Actually, I have a plan to study in Canada next year.

So I\'m really anticipating it.

>> CORRECT!