If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how do you manage? What advice would you give s

2019-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 May

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If I have a lot of things to do in one week, I would set priorities and then do the most important thing first. I don\'t have an ability to do something simultaneously, so I have to do my tasks, step by step. To be in a hurry is not a good way to achieve our goals. If somebody is very busy, I would like to say that just not to be angry and take it easy and do it intensively. I had a lot of patients to treat this week and my mother in low came to hospital to get first chemotherapy. I had to guide my mother in law because she had a difficulties to find the exam room, clinic and so on. Hospital is really complicated to find the way. If I didn\'t guide her, she could not finish all examinations that she had to do. I was really exhausted to do many things last week. However, I have done it clearly because I set priorities and took it easy.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! I hope that you were able to take a rest on the weekend, since you said that you were very busy last week.

I hope that your mother-in-law will get better soon. See you later. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

If I have a lot of things to do in one week, I would set priorities and then do the most important thing first.

>> CORRECT

OR >> If I have a lot of things to do in a week, I would set priorities and do the most important thing first.

I don\'t have an ability to do something simultaneously, so I have to do my tasks, step by step.

>> I don\'t have an ability to do things simultaneously, so I have to do my tasks step by step.

To be in a hurry is not a good way to achieve our goals. 

>> CORRECT
 If somebody is very busy, I would like to say that just not to be angry and take it easy and do it intensively. 

>> If someone is very busy, I would like to tell him he doesn\'t have to be angry. Take it easy and do it intensively.
 I had a lot of patients to treat this week and my mother in low came to hospital to get first chemotherapy.

>> I had a lot of patients to treat this week and my mother-in-law came to the hospital to get her first chemotherapy.

I had to guide my mother in law because she had a difficulties to find the exam room, clinic and so on.

>> I had to guide my mother-in-law because she couldn\'t find the examination room, clinic and others.

Hospital is really complicated to find the way.

>> It\'s really hard to find the rooms in the hospital.

If I didn\'t guide her, she could not finish all examinations that she had to do.

>> If I didn\'t guide her, she could not finish all examinations that she had to TAKE.

I was really exhausted to do many things last week.

However, I have done it clearly because I set priorities and took it easy.

>> CORRECT

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