If you have an animal, what animal would you want to be and why?
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If I\'m be an animal I want to be a cat,bird,dog ,and fish.
First oun cat is very very cute.
And bird is freedom.
And third oun dog is freedom too.
And last oun fish is amaging and cute.
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If you will be an animal, what animal would you want to be and why?
>> If I will be an animal I want to be a cad, bird, dog and fish.
First oun cat is very very cute.
>> First, a cat is very cute.
And bird is freedom. And third oun dog is freedom too.
>> And a bird and a dog symbolizes freedom.
And last oun fish is amaging and cute.
>> And last one, a fish is amazing and cute.
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