If you have nothing to do, do you enjoy yourself or do you get bored?

2022-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

To be honest, I have two opinions about this topic. Firstly, when I feel exhausted because of overload or household chores, I really want to be lazy at home alone. However, just several hours later, I feel bored and depressed. For this reason, I can enjoy me-time after working or studying by watching movies, going to cafes and taking a walk. I am fascinated traveling with my family, my son and husband. In order to enjoy those quality time, I tend to work during the weekdays. For me, having nothing to do is to get pretty bored. My heart is leaning toward doing something rather than doing nothing.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


To be honest, I have two opinions about this topic.

>> CORRECT!


Firstly, when I feel exhausted because of overload or household chores, I really want to be lazy at home alone. 

>> Firstly, when I feel exhausted because of work overload or household chores, I really want to be lazy at home alone. 

However, just several hours later, I feel bored and depressed. 

>> However, a few hours later, I feel bored and depressed. 

For this reason, I can enjoy me-time after working or studying by watching movies, going to cafes and taking a walk. 

>> For this reason, I can enjoy a me-time after working or studying by watching movies, going to cafes, and taking a walk. 

I am fascinated traveling with my family, my son and husband. 

>> I am fascinated with traveling with my family; my son and my husband. 

In order to enjoy those quality time, I tend to work during the weekdays. 

>> CORRECT!


For me, having nothing to do is to get pretty bored. 

>> CORRECT!

My heart is leaning toward doing something rather than doing nothing.

>> My heart is leaning towards doing something rather than doing nothing.

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