If you have nothing to do, do you enjoy yourself or do you get bored?
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Here are my corrections for you:
To be honest, I have two opinions about this topic.
>> CORRECT!
Firstly, when I feel exhausted because of overload or household chores, I really want to be lazy at home alone.
>> Firstly, when I feel exhausted because of work overload or household chores, I really want to be lazy at home alone.
However, just several hours later, I feel bored and depressed.
>> However, a few hours later, I feel bored and depressed.
For this reason, I can enjoy me-time after working or studying by watching movies, going to cafes and taking a walk.
>> For this reason, I can enjoy a me-time after working or studying by watching movies, going to cafes, and taking a walk.
I am fascinated traveling with my family, my son and husband.
>> I am fascinated with traveling with my family; my son and my husband.
In order to enjoy those quality time, I tend to work during the weekdays.
>> CORRECT!
For me, having nothing to do is to get pretty bored.
>> CORRECT!
My heart is leaning toward doing something rather than doing nothing.
>> My heart is leaning towards doing something rather than doing nothing.
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