If you\'ll be given extra free time, what would you like to do?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i have an extra time for me, i would like to travelling.
I like to going to travel and i would like to see and learn other culture by local people.
For example, I would like to go to Bali to learn do Yoga Or I want to go to France for flower lesson.
But if i can\'t not available to have a long term for holidays, I might be just spending extra time to go to beach or watch the Nexflix as usual.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mari!
Thank you for submitting your answer.
I hope that you will be able to spend a holiday in ways on how you like it! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> If I have an extra time for me, I would like to travel.
I like to going to travel and i would like to see and learn other culture by local people.
I like to going to travel and i would like to see and learn other culture by local people.
>> I like to travel and I would like to see and learn other cultures from the local people.
>> Or: I like traveling and I would like to see and learn other cultures from the local people.
For example, I would like to go to Bali to learn do Yoga Or I want to go to France for flower lesson.
For example, I would like to go to Bali to learn do Yoga Or I want to go to France for flower lesson.
>> For example, I would like to go to Bali to learn how to do Yoga Or I want to go to France for a flower lesson.
But if i can\'t not available to have a long term for holidays, I might be just spending extra time to go to beach or watch the Nexflix as usual.
>> But if I\'m not available to have a long term holiday, I might be just spending extra time to go to the beach or watch Netflix as usual.
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