If you made a video about August, what would you put in it?
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Hello Su,
I would like to sincerely thank you for successfully completing your homework – I truly appreciate it!
August is a popular vacation season, with many people traveling to various places. They take pleasure in activities such as swim[이름]g in the sea and cherishing moments with their families. ^^ Keep up the good work, Su. See you later!
~Teacher Cathy
August is vacation season.
>>CORRECT
OR>>August is when many people go on vacation.
many people leave to other region.
>>Many people move to other regions.
They enjoy swim[이름]g at sea or spending to their family.
>>They enjoy swim[이름]g in the sea or spending time with their family.
So i will film a sea and many people who are be happy.
>>So, I will film the sea and many people who are happy.
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