If you meet some South Koreans there in your place, what kind of information will you ask them?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, first of all, I\'d like to ask some useful shopping centers such as clothes and shoes, grocery not just big shopping malls like COSTCO and Walmart. Because, those are quite busy and there are too many products packed which are too heavy.
Besides, I wonder if there are Korean communities. I want to meet people to make a friend.
Lastly, I want to choose a good presbyterian church so that I can relax and recharge my batteries through worship and relationship with the people.
강사 첨삭
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Trying to find new friends can take place in some of your favorite places, like a coffee shop or a restaurant. Also, you can be in the loop of the local events such as market day on weekends. Attend them and introduce yourself. You can also try using an application on your phone. Seek out people with similar interests and don’t be afraid to make the first move.
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Happy weekend!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: Well, first of all, I\'d like to ask some useful shopping centers such as clothes, shoes, and groceries not just big shopping malls like COSTCO and Walmart.
Besides, I wonder if there are Korean communities.
Lastly, I want to choose a good presbyterian church so that I can relax and recharge my batteries through worship and relationship with the people.
Because, those are quite busy and there are too many products packed which are too heavy.
>> Correct!
Besides, I wonder if there are Korean communities.
>> Correct!
I want to meet people to make a friend.
>> Correct!
Lastly, I want to choose a good presbyterian church so that I can relax and recharge my batteries through worship and relationship with the people.
>> Correct!
Or: Presbyterian
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