If you owned an island to yourself, what rules would you implement?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I owned an island to myself, I would limit the land people can have.
Because some may have too much land and some may not have land.
So, I want an island on a small scale.
And then, I will be able to manage the whole island.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because some may have too much land and some may not have land.
And then, I will be able to manage the whole island.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
If I owned an island to myself, I would limit the land people can have.
>> If I owned an island, I would limit the land people can have.
Because some may have too much land and some may not have land.
>> CORRECT!
So, I want an island on a small scale.
>> CORRECT!
And then, I will be able to manage the whole island.
>> CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.