If you’re feeling down, how can you make yourself feel better?

2020-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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As I get older, I endure it all. When I was young, I couldn\'t stand it, but I was able to control my mood. I cry out in my heart. Relax comfortably... I try not to show my bad mood. Then he mutters alone. When the opponent asks, I answer them nothing. If I\'m really in a bad mood, crying out loud or getting better when I sleep

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! I think that sleeping is a good idea. Everyone should try it! Thank you and have a good day! ~~T.Dee

As I get older, I endure it all.
>>CORRECT!
When I was young, I couldn\'t stand it, but I was able to control my mood.
>>CORRECT!
I cry out in my heart. Relax comfortably...
>>I cry inside and I try to relax comfortably.
I try not to show my bad mood. Then he mutters alone.
>>I try not to show my bad mood. Then, I isolate myself.
When the opponent asks, I answer them nothing.
>>When someone asks me, I don\'t give an answer.
If I\'m really in a bad mood, crying out loud or getting better when I sleep
>>If I\'m really in a bad mood, I cry out loud or I sleep to feel better.

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