If you\'re given a chance to go back in the past, what will you do?

2020-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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If the God allow me to come back in the past, I will go abroad with my companion without any interruptions from my business. sometimes 3 months in Africa, 3 months in Asia, 3 months in Europe, 3 months in America... And I will play table tennis game with my gate who is familiar with me. With advanced skill of pingpong, I really want to challenge pro game in world champion ship.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Ethan!

It\'s nice to know your answer about this question.
I bet it\'s nice to go back and do the things we wanted.
But since we don\'t know its possibility, I hope that we\'ll be able to do the things we want in the present and in the future. ^^

~Teacher Gina


If the God allow me to come back in the past, I will go abroad with my companion without any interruptions from my business.
>> If God allows me to come back in the past, I will go abroad with my companion without any interruption from my business.
sometimes 3 months in Africa, 3 months in Asia, 3 months in Europe, 3 months in America...
>> CORRECT.
And I will play table tennis game with my gate who is familiar with me.
>> And I will play a table tennis game with my date who is familiar with me.
With advanced skill of pingpong, I really want to challenge pro game in world champion ship.
>> With an advanced skill in pingpong, I really want to challenge in a pro game in the world championship.

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