If you\'re talking about rules to follow between love, I think there is.

2023-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

If you\'re talking about rules to follow between love, I think there is. Love is a good thing, but I don\'t think I should force my feelings on others. Each person will set different rules, but the rules I set are not obsessed with the other person and try to understand them, and even if the other person is good, they don\'t do anything I don\'t like. All these rules were made because I didn\'t want to change.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름],

I was impressed by your reflections on love and personal guidelines. Your perspective on establishing healthy boundaries and showing respect is quite insightful. I also wanted to commend you on expressing these ideas in English – you\'re doing a fantastic job of combining language learning with thoughtful exploration. Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

If you\'re talking about rules to follow between love, I think there is.

>>If you’re talking about rules to follow in love, I think there are.

Love is a good thing, but I don\'t think I should force my feelings on others.

>>Love is a good thing, yet I believe I shouldn\'t force my feelings on others.

Each person will set different rules, but the rules I set are not obsessed with the other person and try to understand them, and even if the other person is good, they don\'t do anything I don\'t like.

>>Each person will set different rules, but the rules I set are not obsessed with the other person, and try to understand them, and even if the other person is good, they don\'t do anything I don\'t like.

OR>>Everyone makes their own rules, but my rules aren\'t too focused on what others do. I try to understand them, and even if they\'re nice, I stick to things I\'m comfortable with.

All these rules were made because I didn\'t want to change.

>>CORRECT

OR>>All these rules came into existence because I was unwilling to change myself.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·