If you received enough money to never need to work again, what would you spend your time doing?
학생이 쓴 원문
I once thought about what I would do and how I spend my time if I had enough money not to need to work. I might travel to various cities or play tennis because I always feel thirsty to do them more due to time and budget constraints.However, giving a second thought, would I be satisfied and feel happy doing them all the time whenever I want? Probably not.There is a term used in economy: the law of diminishing marginal utility. Let’s say you are deadly starving since you haven’t eaten anything for last few days. A piece of bread will give you a feeling of heaven. After being full, even a delicious banquet won’t give you much satisfaction.If you have enough money and time and you can do whatever and whenever you want to, you won’t be happy as you used to be when you did them out of your hectic schedule or tight budget. So I might need to find things that don’t make me feel bored even if I do continuously.I might spend my time studying a foreign language such as Japanese and Chinese.
강사 첨삭
Good day Sir [이름]!
It is a rainy afternoon here in my city.
How are you today?
You are right! There are things that we won\'t be satisfied because of limited time and budget.
I guess we should always find time to treat ourselves whenever we can.
You should also have a break like a vacation because you deserve it.
I hope that you will have a great time today.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I once thought about what I would do and how I spend my time if I had enough money not to need to work.
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I might travel to various cities or play tennis because I always feel thirsty to do them more due to time and budget constraints.
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However, giving a second thought, would I be satisfied and feel happy doing them all the time whenever I want?
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Probably not.
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There is a term used in economy: the law of diminishing marginal utility.
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Let’s say you are deadly starving since you haven’t eaten anything for last few days.
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A piece of bread will give you a feeling of heaven.
>> correct
After being full, even a delicious banquet won’t give you much satisfaction.
>> correct
If you have enough money and time and you can do whatever and whenever you want to, you won’t be happy as you used to be when you did them out of your hectic schedule or tight budget.
>> correct
So I might need to find things that don’t make me feel bored even if I do continuously.
>> correct
I might spend my time studying a foreign language such as Japanese and Chinese.
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