If you want live in other country you should learn many things about new country
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ESSAY: When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
I believe that if you move to another country you should comply customs of the new country. And if you follow the customs of the new country, you should learn about that.
Here are some examples of importance of following the customs. Driving manner is different from country to country. if you want to yield in Korea you can send a sign like yellow color, But in Germany you should send sign like right up and down. And if you want to wait other car in Germany you should send a finger sign, but there is no specific sign in Korea.
This is just an example. If you want live in other country you should learn many things about new country if you want to adapt well.
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I believe that if you move to another country you should comply customs of the new country.
>>> I believe that if you move to another country you should comply with the customs of that country.
And if you follow the customs of the new country, you should learn about that.
>>> And if you follow their customs, you should learn about them.
Here are some examples of importance of following the customs.
Here are some examples of importance of following the customs.
>>> Here are some importance of following other country\'s customs.
Driving manner is different from country to country.
>>> Driving manner is different from one country to another.
if you want to yield in Korea you can send a sign like yellow color, But in Germany you should send sign like right up and down.
>>> If you want to overtake in Korea you can send a sign like yellow color, but in Germany you should send a sign like right up and down.
And if you want to wait other car in Germany you should send a finger sign, but there is no specific sign in Korea.
>>> And if you want to wait for other\'s car in Germany you should send a finger sign, but there is no specific sign in Korea.
This is just an example.
This is just an example.
>>> CORRECT
If you want live in other country you should learn many things about new country if you want to adapt well.
>>> If you want to live in another country you should learn many things about their customs and be able to adapt well.
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