If you wanted to reward yourself for something that you did, what might you do to celebrate?
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I studied English to transfer to a university in 2016. and I remember studying really hard at that time. At that time, I studied at an academy for a year to go to another university. At that time, I studied at an academy for a year to go to another university. That was the hardest time of my life to study. Although I couldn\'t go to a very good university, my parents buying me a good laptop because I succeeded in transferring to college.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! It\'s actually nice to treat yourself sometimes for the efforts that you do on something. A pat on the shoulder makes us appreciate ourselves. :) It motivates us more to do great things.
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I studied English to transfer to a university in 2016. and I remember studying really hard at that time.
>> I studied English to transfer to a university in 201 and I remember studying really hard at that time.
At that time, I studied at an academy for a year to go to another university.
>> At that time, I studied at an academy for a year to go to another university.
At that time, I studied at an academy for a year to go to another university.
>> REDUNDANT SENTENCE.
That was the hardest time of my life to study.
>> That was the hardest time of my life while studying.
Although I couldn\'t go to a very good university, my parents buying me a good laptop because I succeeded in transferring to college.
>> Despite me not entering a very good university, my parents still bought me a laptop because I succeeded in transferring to college.
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