If you wanted to reward yourself for something that you did, what might you do to celebrate?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can reward myself for living untill now.
Too many people die in one day, and too many people live in poverty.
Too many people do war, and too many people want lots of money.
Too many people want to get power, and too many people use it to bad way.
Because of these reasons, many people die in one day.
But I am living in my house very normaly.
Now is Covid-19 age, but I am breathing and moving in my house very very normaly.
So I am thanks for living in here untill now, and I want to reward myself for living untill now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It\'s actually nice to treat yourself sometimes for the efforts that you do on something. A pat on the shoulder makes us appreciate ourselves. :) It motivates us more to do great things.
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I can reward myself for living untill now.
Too many people die in one day, and too many people live in poverty.
Too many people do war, and too many people want lots of money.
Too many people want to get power, and too many people use it to bad way.
Because of these reasons, many people die in one day.
But I am living in my house very normaly.
Now is Covid-19 age, but I am breathing and moving in my house very very normaly.
So I am thanks for living in here untill now, and I want to reward myself for living untill now.
>> I can reward myself by living my life right now.
Too many people die in one day, and too many people live in poverty.
>> CORRECT
Too many people do war, and too many people want lots of money.
>>Many people are in war and many people want lots of money.
Too many people want to get power, and too many people use it to bad way.
>> Some want power and use it in a bad way.
Because of these reasons, many people die in one day.
>> Because of these reasons, many people die in a day.
But I am living in my house very normaly.
>> As of now, I am living my life normally.
Now is Covid-19 age, but I am breathing and moving in my house very very normaly.
>> Even though there is COVID, I still live my live normally.
So I am thanks for living in here untill now, and I want to reward myself for living untill now.
>> That\'s why I am thankful with what I have right now and I want to reward myself for being contented with it.
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