If you were 80 years old, what would you tell your children?
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In that situation, i will tell \" do everything, exprience everyting you can, if you have a chance.\"
the reason is i think i don\'t have lots of exprience. even i didn\'t got part time job in korea. for example serving in cafe or restaurant
but through this working holiday i\'ve got many expreience but i just got only 2 job in one year!
just only 2 job can make my eyes open. realationship, rule, boss, newcomer, drive, etc there is so much thing
some of my friends said \"you don\'t have to expreience part time job, if you don\'t need. there is nothing to learn\"
but i don\'t agree they just want make money. to get If you have a different mind, you can get something else.
SO do it, expreience it that is my sentence
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Hello [이름],
Thanks for doing your homework always. It shows your diligence in studying English:)
-Rachel
In that situation, i will tell \" do everything, exprience everyting you can, if you have a chance.\"
>> In that situation, I would tell them to do everything, and gain experiences whenever they could and when they have the chance.
the reason is i think i don\'t have lots of exprience. even i didn\'t got part time job in korea. for example serving in cafe or restaurant, but through this working holiday i\'ve got many expreience but i just got only 2 job in one year!
the reason is i think i don\'t have lots of exprience. even i didn\'t got part time job in korea. for example serving in cafe or restaurant, but through this working holiday i\'ve got many expreience but i just got only 2 job in one year!
>> The reason for this is that I don\'t have a lot of experiences, and I didn\'t even have part-time jobs in Korea such as serving in a cafe or a restaurant, but through working holiday I was able to gain various experiences even though I only had two jobs in a year.
just only 2 job can make my eyes open. realationship, rule, boss, newcomer, drive, etc there is so much thing
just only 2 job can make my eyes open. realationship, rule, boss, newcomer, drive, etc there is so much thing
>> Having just two jobs opened my eyes to different realities and perspectives on relationships, rules, employers, employees and even mundane things such as driving.
some of my friends said, \"You don\'t have to experience part time job, if you don\'t need. There is nothing to learn\"
some of my friends said, \"You don\'t have to experience part time job, if you don\'t need. There is nothing to learn\"
>>correct
>>Some of my friends told me not to experience having a part-time job if it is not necessary because there is nothing to learn.
But i don\'t agree they just want make money.
But i don\'t agree they just want make money.
>> correct
to get If you have a different mind, you can get something else.
>> For me, if you have a different mind, you can gain something else.
SO do it, experience it that is my sentence
SO do it, experience it that is my sentence
>> correct
>> So do it; experience it; that is my motto.
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