If you were a car, what car would you like to be? Why?

2014-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It is an interesting question. I do not want to be just one model. Today I would be a Ferrari, tomorrow BMW 500, the day after tomorrow Jaguar XJ. Sometimes, I would be a Range Rover to drive off-roads or Mercedes Benz 600 to look elegant, comfortable, reliable, and successful. I would like to be a different car day by day as each model has its own characteristics. It goes to my life as well. I would like to be a different person and experience various things. It is boring to live as a same person until the end of our life. It would be wonderful if we were given a chance to become another person after a certain period of time. I wish I could live as a typical accountant today, then someday as an actor, then a politician, and then a professional athlete. I am still not quite sure which car best fits my image. If I have to choose just one model, I would be a BMW 530 that is powerful, reliable, responding accurately when steering, not standing out, but still favored by most people.

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Good evening Sir [이름]! I\'d like to say thank you very much for extending your class again with me. I am so grateful that we will be having more classes together and a lot of topics to talk about. I do agree with you. I think we should strive harder to be a better person. In various ways, we can be a different person.^^ Thank you for doing your homework. I enjoyed reading your essay. Keep on writing. See you in class. Teacher Nina   It is an interesting question. >> Correct! I do not want to be just one model. >> Correct! >> OR: I don\'t want to be just one model of a car. Today I would be a Ferrari, tomorrow BMW 500, the day after tomorrow Jaguar XJ. >> Correct! Sometimes, I would be a Range Rover to drive off-roads or Mercedes Benz 600 to look elegant, comfortable, reliable, and successful. >> Correct! I would like to be a different car day by day as each model has its own characteristics. >> Correct! It goes to my life as well. >> It goes with my life as well. >> OR: It suits my life as well. I would like to be a different person and experience various things. >> Correct! It is boring to live as a same person until the end of our life. >> It is boring to live as the same person until the end of our life. It would be wonderful if we were given a chance to become another person after a certain period of time. >> Correct! I wish I could live as a typical accountant today, then someday as an actor, then a politician, and then a professional athlete. >> Correct! I am still not quite sure which car best fits my image. >> Correct! >> OR: I still don\'t now exactly which car best fits my image/ personality. If I have to choose just one model, I would be a BMW 530 that is powerful, reliable, responding accurately when steering, not standing out, but still favored by most people. >> Correct!

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