If you were a car, what car would you like to be? Why?
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It is an interesting question. I do not want to be just one model. Today I would be a Ferrari, tomorrow BMW 500, the day after tomorrow Jaguar XJ. Sometimes, I would be a Range Rover to drive off-roads or Mercedes Benz 600 to look elegant, comfortable, reliable, and successful. I would like to be a different car day by day as each model has its own characteristics. It goes to my life as well. I would like to be a different person and experience various things. It is boring to live as a same person until the end of our life. It would be wonderful if we were given a chance to become another person after a certain period of time. I wish I could live as a typical accountant today, then someday as an actor, then a politician, and then a professional athlete. I am still not quite sure which car best fits my image. If I have to choose just one model, I would be a BMW 530 that is powerful, reliable, responding accurately when steering, not standing out, but still favored by most people.
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Good evening Sir [이름]!
I\'d like to say thank you very much for extending your class again with me.
I am so grateful that we will be having more classes together and a lot of topics to talk about.
I do agree with you. I think we should strive harder to be a better person.
In various ways, we can be a different person.^^
Thank you for doing your homework. I enjoyed reading your essay. Keep on writing. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
It is an interesting question.
>> Correct!
I do not want to be just one model.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I don\'t want to be just one model of a car.
Today I would be a Ferrari, tomorrow BMW 500, the day after tomorrow Jaguar XJ.
>> Correct!
Sometimes, I would be a Range Rover to drive off-roads or Mercedes Benz 600 to look elegant, comfortable, reliable, and successful.
>> Correct!
I would like to be a different car day by day as each model has its own characteristics.
>> Correct!
It goes to my life as well.
>> It goes with my life as well.
>> OR: It suits my life as well.
I would like to be a different person and experience various things.
>> Correct!
It is boring to live as a same person until the end of our life.
>> It is boring to live as the same person until the end of our life.
It would be wonderful if we were given a chance to become another person after a certain period of time.
>> Correct!
I wish I could live as a typical accountant today, then someday as an actor, then a politician, and then a professional athlete.
>> Correct!
I am still not quite sure which car best fits my image.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I still don\'t now exactly which car best fits my image/ personality.
If I have to choose just one model, I would be a BMW 530 that is powerful, reliable, responding accurately when steering, not standing out, but still favored by most people.
>> Correct!
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