If you were a director, what movie would you want to shoot?
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Wow! It will be fantastic, to be a movie director. If I were a movie director, I will shoot a fantasy story like Harry Potter. Some one enter the magic world, he/she will show his/her adventure.
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-Teacher Sandy-
Wow! It will be fantastic, to be a movie director.
>> Correct.
If I were a movie director, I will shoot a fantasy story like Harry Potter.
>> Correct.
Some one enter the magic world, he/she will show his/her adventure.
>> Someone would enter the magical world and he/she will be showing his/her adventure.
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