If you were a fashion designer, what kinds of clothes would you design?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would design children\\\'s pajamas if I were a fashion designer. I have been interested in children\\\'s PJs since I found my son very excited when I bought him a dinosaur PJ for this birthday present. If I could design fantastic PJs for children, they could have wonderful nights. If a boy suffered from nightmares or anything, superhero PJ could help them fight against scary things that bothered them when they tried to go to sleep. If a girl would like to have an awesome time with her favorite animation character, she could fly with the character in the character PJ in her dream.
As you know, I am not interested in fashion itself, and even I don\\\'t understand those who are obsessed with following the latest fashion trends. However, I am very interested in something that makes people happy. More specifically, I would like to be a children\\\'s PJ fashion designer because I, a father of three children, want to make them happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Steve! Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. Your answer is interesting. You made me want to wait for your designs. I really hope you could be a designer of children pajamas.
- Debbie
>> I would design children\'s pajamas if I were a fashion designer.
As you know, I am not interested in fashion itself, and even I don\\\'t understand those who are obsessed with following the latest fashion trends.
I have been interested in children\\\'s PJs since I found my son very excited when I bought him a dinosaur PJ for this birthday present.
>> I have been interested in children\'s pajamas since I found my son very excited when I bought him dinosaur pajamas for his birthday.
If I could design fantastic PJs for children, they could have wonderful nights.
>> If I could design lovely pajamas for children, they could have wonderful nights.
If a boy suffered from nightmares or anything, superhero PJ could help them fight against scary things that bothered them when they tried to go to sleep.
>> If a boy suffered from nightmares or anything, superhero pajamas could make him feel that he could fight the scary things that bothered him when he tried to go to sleep.
If a girl would like to have an awesome time with her favorite animation character, she could fly with the character in the character PJ in her dream.
>> If a girl would like to have an awesome time with her favorite animation character, she could fly with that character in her dream through the character pajamas.
As you know, I am not interested in fashion itself, and even I don\\\'t understand those who are obsessed with following the latest fashion trends.
>> As you know, I am not interested in fashion itself, and I don\'t even understand those who are obsessed with following the latest fashion trends.
However, I am very interested in something that makes people happy.
>> This is a good sentence.
More specifically, I would like to be a children\\\'s PJ fashion designer because I, a father of three children, want to make them happy.
>> More specifically, I would like to be a designer of children\'s pajamas because I am a father who wants to make his three children happy.
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